I took up
Rachael Harrie's dare. Please go to her
linky page and LIKE me
(Number 71) if you like my entry. The entries at
the top have many likes already, and the ones near the (current) bottom are
falling flat although many are really good. So, please, please go and read
entries and vote for those you really like.
Here's the
challenge:
Write a blog post in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, whether flash fiction, non-fiction, humorous blog musings, poem, etc. The blog post should include the word "imago" in the title, and include the following words: "miasma," "lacuna," "oscitate," "synchronicity". If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional and included in the word count), make reference to a mirror in your post. For those who want an even greater challenge (optional), make your post 200 words EXACTLY!
Of course
as a German, I had to look up all the obligatory words (except Imago; I'm a
forester and I have had more experience with those than I care for), and it
took my quite a while to figure out that 'oscitate' means 'to yawn'. Well, why
use a simple word when a difficult one will do.
Here's my
entry (crossposted from my
homepage blog). I hope you like it. It's got all the requirements (obligatory
words, mirror, and 200 word restriction). This time, it's more or less
non-fiction (albeit with a little added imagination).
The
winged Imago
Slumber
receded. Light registered on her brain. She oscitated. Was it time to wake
already? If she opened her cell too early, the miasma of the breeding pond
would kill her. If she left it too late, her strength might not suffice. She
twisted and stretched. The cell was awfully tight, and her back itched. She
rubbed it against the upper side of her confinement. Yes, that helped.
A tear in
the fabric of her cell. Oh dear. She stopped moving. Was it safe? Her ears
listened to the slightest sounds from outside. Birdsong – far away, thank the
Mighty Blue. Not a single frog croaked below – didn't mean there weren’t any.
She
couldn't stay in here forever. Did she dare? Carefully as not to disturb the
world outside, she left her cell. It proved harder than she had expected. She
arched her back, pulled out one dainty leg after the other, and stood there –
waiting – listening. The lacuna she had left, an empty shell beside her. A hunger
pang shot though her abdomen. She needed to hunt as soon as her body hardened.
In perfect synchronicity, the dragon-fly spread her wings and soared over the
blue mirror of her kingdom.



10 comments:
Oh Cat! I could just read your writing all day! How captivating and beautiful this piece is. And you know what? The fact that this was non-fiction completely vanished as I read - I thought you were writing about a fairy! I was so caught up in her story - so gloriously descriptive and mesmerizing. Thanks, Cat for the great pleasure of reading such a remarkable piece!
*blush*
I love that last line! Very well done. I had to look up all the words, too, so you had me beat by one.
maybe I'll tell you one day why I knew the word Imago...
Lovely piece! I voted for you!
Thank you Teresa.
Nice job and I, too, loved the last line, especially as it included mirror. Just saying Hi from our blog hop adventure group too :)
Hi Claire. I'm glad you liked it.
Wow! This a very very beautiful writing.
I need to check in more often to read writing like this.
*blush*
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