this is the logline (similar to a back cover blurb) for a novel I am currently working on. I would like your feedback if you don't mind.
TITLE: Victor's Rage
GENRE: YA historical
When her mother wants to marry sixteen year old Rieke Waldmann to the miller, Rieke realizes why equal rights and self-determination are so important to her secret love William. But Willem leaves home and fights in the German revolution of 1848, and Rieke battles her growing attraction to the gentle young miller, the first person to understand and appreciate her the way she is. Then, Rieke discovers disturbing truths about her late father, and choosing either of her suitors could cost her her love, her friendship and her home. (89 words)
Thanks a lot,